Herein lives wisdom, beauty, and increase; If all were minded so, the times should cease, She carv'd thee for her seal, and meant thereby, XII. When I do count the clock that tells the time, 9 for store,] i. e. to be preserved for use. 3 ; MALONE. I Look, whom she best endow'd, she gave THEE more; Which bounteous gift thou should'st in bounty cherish :] On a survey of mankind, you will find that nature, however liberal she may have been to others, has been still more bountiful to you. The old copy reads-she gave the more; which was evidently a misprint. MALONE. 2 Thou should'st print more, NOR LET THAT COPY DIE.] So, in Twelfth Night : 66 Lady, you are the cruellest she alive, "If you will lead the graces to the grave, 3 And sable curls, ALL silver'd o'er with white;] The old copy reads: 66 or silver'd o'er with white." Or was clearly an error of the press. Mr. Tyrwhitt would read:- are silver'd o'er with white. MALOne. So, in Hamlet: "His beard was, as I've seen it in his life, 4 When lofty TREES I see barren of leaves, Which erst from heat did CANOPY the herd,] So, in A Midsummer-Night's Dream: And summer's green all girded up in sheaves, Borne on the bier with white and bristly beard 5; Then of thy beauty do I question make, That thou among the wastes of time must go, Since sweets and beauties do themselves forsake, And die as fast as they see others grow; And nothing 'gainst time's scythe can make defence, Save breed, to brave him, when he takes thee hence. XIII. O, that you were yourself! but, love, you are "Quite over-canopy'd with luscious woodbine." MAalone. 5 And SUMMER'S GREEN all girded up in sheaves, Borne on the bier with white and bristly BEARD ;] So, in A Midsummer-Night's Dream: green corn "Hath rotted, ere his youth attain'd a beard." C. 6 Save breed, to brave him,] Except children, whose youth may set the scythe of Time at defiance, and render thy own death less painful. MALONE. 7 Against this coming end you should prepare, And your sweet semblance to some other give.] This is a sentiment that Shakspeare is never weary of expressing. We meet with it again in Venus and Adonis : 8 66 By law of nature thou art bound to breed, "That thine may live, when thou thyself art dead; "In that thy likeness still is left alive." MALONE. Find no DETERMINATION:] So Daniel, in one of his Sonnets, 1592: 66 -in beauty's lease expir'd appears The date of age, the calends of our death." Yourself again, after yourself's decease, When your sweet issue your sweet form should bear. Who lets so fair a house fall to decay, O! none but unthrifts:-Dear my love, you You had a father; let your son say so, XIV. Not from the stars do I my judgment pluck; Of plagues, of dearths, or seasons' quality: Again, in Macbeth: “But in them nature's copy's not eterne." Determination in legal language means end. MALOne. So, in Macbeth: "our high-plac'd Macbeth "Shall live the lease of nature." STEEVENS. 9 Which HUSBANDRY in honour might uphold,] Husbandry is generally used by Shakspeare for economical prudence. So, in King Henry V.: "For our bad neighbours make us early stirrers, MALONE. By OFT predict-] Dr. Sewel reads-By aught predict; but the text is right.-So, in the Birth of Merlin, 1662: "How much the oft report of this bless'd hermit The old reading may be the true one. "By oft predict" may mean- By what is most frequently prognosticated." STEEV ENS. But from thine eyes my knowledge I derive2, When I consider every thing that grows 4 5 2 But from thine EYES my knowledge I DERIVE,] So, in Love's Labour's Lost: "From women's eyes this doctrine I derive." STEEVENS. If from thyself TO STORE thou would'st convert :] If thou would'st change thy single state, and beget a numerous progeny. So, before: "Let those whom nature hath not made for store." Again, in Romeo and Juliet : 66 O, she is rich in beauty; only poor, "That when she dies, with beauty dies her store." MALONE. 4 Where wasteful TIME DEBATETH With DECAY,] So, in All's Well That Ends Well: "Debate it at their leisure." MALONE. 5 To change your day of youth to sullied night;] So, in King Richard III.: "Hath dimm'd your infant morn to aged night." STEEVENS. XVI. But wherefore do not you a mightier way With means more blessed than my barren rhyme? And many maiden gardens, yet unset, With virtuous wish would bear you living flowers 7, skill. 3 And many maiden gardens, yet unset,] We have the same allusion in our author's Lover's Complaint: 7 "And knew the patterns of his foul beguiling, MALONE. would bear you living flowers,] The first edition reads, by an apparent error of the press :-' your living flowers.' MALONE. • Much liker than your painted cOUNTERFEIT:] A counterfeit formerly signified a portrait. So, in Greene's Farewell to Folly, 1617: Why do the painters, in figuring forth the counterfeit of Love, draw him blind? So, in the Merchant of Venice: 66 66 What find I here? "Fair Portia's counterfeit?" MALONE. 9 So should the LINES of life-] This appears to me obscure. Perhaps the poet wrote-" the lives of life: i. e. 'children.' MALONE. The "lines of life" perhaps are 'living pictures,' viz. children. ANON. This explanation is very plausible. Shakspeare has again used line with a reference to painting in All's Well That Ends Well: I "And every line and trick of his sweet favour." MALONE. my PUPIL pen,] This expression may be considered as a slight proof that the poems before us were our author's earliest compositions. STEEVENS. 2 Neither in inward worth, nor outward FAIR,] See p. 240, n. 6. MALONE. |